Bug 214931

Summary: General Grammatical Errors In /Documentation/process/2.Process.rst
Product: Documentation Reporter: Hunter Chasens (hunter.chasens18)
Component: man-pagesAssignee: documentation_man-pages (documentation_man-pages)
Status: NEW ---    
Severity: low CC: alx
Priority: P1    
Hardware: All   
OS: Linux   
Kernel Version: Subsystem:
Regression: No Bisected commit-id:
Attachments: attachment-4075-0.html

Description Hunter Chasens 2021-11-03 13:05:59 UTC
Line numbers correspond to the raw .rst document, not the compiled document.

Location in source: /Documentation/process/2.Process.rst
Build Date & Hardware: 5.14.14

Line 71:
-At that point the whole process starts over again.
+At that point, the whole process starts over again.


Line 169:
-   in the open if at all possible; it can save a lot of time redesigning
+   in the open, if at all possible; it can save a lot of time redesigning
    things later.

Line 177:
- - Wider review.  When the patch is getting close to ready for mainline
+ - Wider review.  When the patch is getting close to being ready for mainline

Line 182:
-   process works, this step leads to more extensive review of the patch and
+   process works, this step leads to a more extensive review of the patch and

Line 411:
-This list is an intimidating place to be; volume can reach 500 messages per
+This list is an intimidating place to be; the volume can reach 500 messages per
Comment 1 Alejandro Colomar 2021-11-03 14:35:46 UTC
Hi Hunter,

Thanks for the report.  However, the man-pages are separate from the kernel documentation, so the report should go to a different component (I don't know which one, sorry).

Cheers,

Alex
Comment 2 Hunter Chasens 2021-11-03 14:37:06 UTC
Created attachment 299439 [details]
attachment-4075-0.html

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On Wed, Nov 3, 2021 at 10:35 AM <bugzilla-daemon@bugzilla.kernel.org> wrote:

> https://bugzilla.kernel.org/show_bug.cgi?id=214931
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> Alejandro Colomar (man-pages) (alx.manpages@gmail.com) changed:
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>                  CC|                            |alx.manpages@gmail.com
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> --- Comment #1 from Alejandro Colomar (man-pages) (alx.manpages@gmail.com)
> ---
> Hi Hunter,
>
> Thanks for the report.  However, the man-pages are separate from the kernel
> documentation, so the report should go to a different component (I don't
> know
> which one, sorry).
>
> Cheers,
>
> Alex
>
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